Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on I Wanna Be

I’m not up to date on the current trends in Pop music, but I feel lost in this one.  You start out singing to someone else with “They don’t know the power you hide”, but then you throw in “I wanna be”, which shifts the focus. ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on "I LOOOVE THAT WOMAN"

I didn’t know Robert, it’s like something is missing and I’m wanting more.  I still don’t know why you’d want to be with her, or why she would be with you after saying such awful things about her.  You say she’s a... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on "I LOOOVE THAT WOMAN"

In theory, writing a song about how you love somebody despite all of their faults sounds like a good idea.  In reality, it can be tough to pull off. I wrote a similar song once before.  Showed the lyrics to a writing friend and first thing they said... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Sitting on the Moon

On the plus side, I like the idea of the song.  I like the music and the chord progression… reminds me of Pink Floyd! On the negative side, the first verse makes me think of Yoda and the way he would talk.  It’s not how Gilmore would... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on The Lighthouse Keeper

Hey Jackson,  I guess this is one of the demos you mentioned earlier.  As for sound and production, it’s all good.  But, I’m not particularly fond of the arrangement. If you’re trying for commercial success, this song is too long, coming in around 4:40. ... Read More