Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on GPS

A quick couple of thoughts… With “distracted driving” being in the news quite a bit lately, not sure I’d be singing about running stop signs because we were kissing. I would consider dropping the “that” in the chorus before “I can’t forget”.  A little pause before would... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on I've Got a Problem

Hey Katie, sounds like you wrote this from personal experience and a lot of feeling, which is a good thing.  I think you have the basic bones of a good song here, but think it needs some tweaking. I feel what you mean about it dragging a little. ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Popsicle

Hey Kole, a few quick thoughts on your song.  Please keep in mind I’m not up on the latest Pop trends. Definitely has an old school sound and vibe to it.  Maybe it’s your long pre-chorus, but feels like it’s taking too long to get... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on concrete or sand

Posting the lyrics would be of great help.  Logon, select the song, then click on edit song details, then copy and paste them in. Phillip

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on I Can’t Wait (updated work in progress) © 2017

Might be the music, but to me this version sounds a little darker than your earlier version.  As Benny said of the first one, the rhyme scheme kind of throws everything off, but please, experiment away. I still think the verses aren’t painting the mental images they should.... Read More