Brent Baxter gave feedback on Hella Good Time

Hey, Kevin!  Thanks for posting.  I see what’s been said about POV, and I agree totally that you want to pick a POV and stick with it.  However, I see that you do transition in the PC with “So I said.”  So it makes sense.... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on A Girl That I Used To Know (G. Irwin, D. Branch, M. Leach, J. Withenshaw)

Hey, George!  Thanks for sharing your song!  There’s a lot of good stuff going on.  You’re definitely paying attention to current, commercial country.  Cool phrasing, positive-love-tempo/groove. When it comes to the title, if I weren’t looking at the lyric, I’d want... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Your Heart Hit Me

Hi, Sean! Thanks for posting! I like the subtle internal rhyme in V1 of Barcelona and California. I also like the phrase “Mustang bullet.”  Nice.  Good use of imagery.  It’s also positive love in the first person, which is spot-on, commercially. I think you have an... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Kitchenettes

First off, the title is awesome.  It had me interested before I played it.  It made me WANT to hear your song.  So great start!  I don’t know if “prenup” fits with taking all your stuff (unless that WAS the prenup).  I like how... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on The Rescue Plan

Hi, David!  Thanks for sharing your song.  While I dig the title, if I heard it live and then wanted to find it online to buy it, I wouldn’t search for “The Rescue Plan.”  I’d look for “He Reached Down” or “Rescue Me.”  You... Read More