Someday love won't end in flames!
One take iPhone recording
Could you follow the story? What does it make you feel?
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First off, the title is awesome. It had me interested before I played it. It made me WANT to hear your song. So great start! I don’t know if “prenup” fits with taking all your stuff (unless that WAS the prenup). I like how you took us on a journey with a (sad but) satisfying resolution. There’s definitely some cool stuff going on here- I’d love for you to post some more songs!
January 12, 2017
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Pick ups
At bars and such
Hooking up
Till you
Found me
Now I'm in love
Moving in
With you
Oh the life I'll give to you
Furniture and messy rooms
Kitchenettes and diamond rings
I can give you what you need
Tree trunks
Trails of saw dust
Hand made stuff
For you
But you say
"It's not enough
Love ain't much
To me"
Oh the life I gave to you
Baby boys with messy rooms
Kitchenettes & pretty things
Couldn't give you what you need
Prenup
Take all my stuff
Take memories
Of you
Gasoline
Picking up
And smoking up
This room
Oh the life I built with you
Burning up in fiery rooms
Kitchenettes and melted things
Love is all I'll ever need
Love is all I'll ever need
Love is all I'll ever need
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Love how the simplicity of the lyrics say a whole lot! Great melody and phrasing too!!!
August 02, 2016
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First off, the title is awesome. It had me interested before I played it. It made me WANT to hear your song. So great start! I don’t know if “prenup” fits with taking all your stuff (unless that WAS the prenup). I like how you took us on a journey with a (sad but) satisfying resolution. There’s definitely some cool stuff going on here- I’d love for you to post some more songs!
January 12, 2017
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Jamie Sagle
Love how the simplicity of the lyrics say a whole lot! Great melody and phrasing too!!!
August 02, 2016