Brent Baxter gave feedback on Wisdom

Hi, Sandra!  Welcome to Frettie, and thanks for sharing your song with us. I like the folk-picking feel.  Glad it has some movement to it- not just a slow ballad. like the detail of his hands shaking as he turned the cap.  Nice! The line “everything that... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Black Widow

Hi, Tommy!  Welcome to Frettie, and thanks for sharing your music with us. Blues aren’t my wheelhouse, but I like the title.  I also like the angle you’ve taken with it.  Love the double-meaning on “better watch where you put your hands.”  Cool. I... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Love Is On The Way

Hi, Rusty!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  I like that it has some tempo.  I like the internal rhymes of the 3rd & 4th lines of verse 1.  I like the repetition of the title in the chorus- leaves no doubt about the title. ... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Tail Lights

Hi, Richard!  Thanks for sharing this song with us. Based on your description, I’m not going to try and fit this into a commercial box- just look at the songwriting itself. It’s a solid song.  It’s clear, well-constructed.  Has some nice imagery (watch butterflies,... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on The Mill

Hey, Tony! Thanks for sharing your song with us.  There’s some nice stuff happening here.  I like the top 3 lines of the chorus. But the last line and the “loved so true” ending fell a little flat for me.  Almost like you were just finishing the... Read More