Dennis Field gave feedback on Settle Down

Nice job! I can see the female vocals peeking in on this like you mentioned above. Your other changes are valid as well. Great use of “What if..” Also very catchy melody. Thanks for sharing!

Dennis Field gave feedback on The Music Tree

Benny, Great job as always telling the story. I actually really liked the spoken aspect to this. The way you speak the first “choirs” and sing it the second time is really nice. By singing it the second time it really makes the chorus stand out and tell the story... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on Calculating Views

I had a tough time understanding the story with this song. The description above helped, but I think listeners who may not have that on hand, could find it tough. My biggest bit of feedback is that I didn’t feel the “hook” to pull me into this like some... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on Coming Home (demo)

JT, Nice job. I think you hit the Hunter Hayes, flare perfectly. Case in point, I had this playing to give you feedback and Julie said, “Hey who’s this?  It sounds like Hunter Hayes”. I found this very catchy. The chorus sticks in my head. The melody is... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on Dreams

I always enjoy the 3am songs that get posted to Frettie. NIce job. This has a nice theatrical flare to it. The break after the first verse is nice. It gives me a moment to reflect on the verse. My feedback would be to push that chorus more. I think... Read More