DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on God The Father & Me

Campfire in the desert song with the cattle I’ve sang many like this alone on horseback. If you want to post the lyrics and add some structure, you could have something.

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on A Piece of Mine

How about the word “from” regarding cracks and weight. Very beautiful sentiment, pretty, encouraging

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on I Lost Hope

Sweet, emotional story. I’m sure a lot of people would love this and relate. A couple lines:  4th line, 3rd verse - how about “after all” And the line in chorus that she never walked through the door gives expectations that she’s coming to you. Try his... Read More

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on How's It Go

I think this has a lot of potential. My opinion is that it needs some spit and polish, but the idea and general framework is there. I don’t see 2 songs there. Clarify the jist of the song more, the chorus. The supporting cast is there.

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on Kind A Crazy

I want to know a bit more of what makes her kinda crazy.