Tried to write a song for Beyoncé.
I think (my opinion only) that this is a great start…definitely could be pop, R&B, or Christian Contemporary. To me, it sounds more like a Selena Gomez type song than Bey because it seems so sweet. If I wrote it, it would be one that I’d let sit for a few months then revisit to see if I can improve it.
May 29, 2026
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Thanks for responding. I’m thinking that someone like Bey would have her own people vet it and most likely would wanna change it My next song will hafta be with your voice in mind Shane. 
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Always
Ooh, ooh, ooh
Whenever I feel like giving up,
When i think I’ve had enough
Whenever I wanna share something
Or need someone listening
He’s always there,
And I know how much he cares,
He’s always right there by my side.
Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh
He’s always there, yeah
through all my highs and lows,
He is my right hand
when the cold wind blows.
I have faith in His plan
Cause he knows-Oh-oh-oh-oh
Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh
He’s always there…
He’s always there.
He’s always there.
Whenever I don’t feel too great yeah,
Happens when I’m all alone,
Even with ten things on my plate,
I have faith things will be okay .
he’s always there,
And I know how much he cares,
He’s always right there by my side.
Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh
He’s always there, yeah
through all my highs and lows,
He is my right hand
when the cold wind blows.
I have faith in His plan
Cause he knows-Oh-oh-oh-oh
Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh
He’s always there…
He’s always there.
He’s always there.
Like a compass spinning round
With no direction known
I’d be lost without him,
if He’d ever go oh-oh-oh
But he knows that i love him
more than I ever show…Oh-oh-oh-oh
So Im always there, yeah
through the highs and lows,
I am like His right hand man
when the cold wind blows.
I know its part of His plan
And i know-Oh-oh-oh-oh
Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh
I’m always there…
I’m always there…
For him….
Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh
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Great sing-a-long Robert. Super nice ‘n tightly written message. Good job!
May 29, 2026
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I think (my opinion only) that this is a great start…definitely could be pop, R&B, or Christian Contemporary. To me, it sounds more like a Selena Gomez type song than Bey because it seems so sweet. If I wrote it, it would be one that I’d let sit for a few months then revisit to see if I can improve it.
May 29, 2026
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Thanks for responding. I’m thinking that someone like Bey would have her own people vet it and most likely would wanna change it My next song will hafta be with your voice in mind Shane.
May 29, 2026
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Shane Trepeaux
Great sing-a-long Robert. Super nice ‘n tightly written message. Good job!
May 29, 2026
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