Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Traveling

I think this song has potential.  I would take the melody up on line 2 of the verses, instead of down.  And if you can have a little more contrast between verse and CH, I think that would make the CH stand out a little more.  I like... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Midnight Streets of Campus

I like this! I think that even though you mention campus streets, it paints a picture that most people can relate to.  It becomes more of a description. Sounds pop to me and makes me want to spend more time with your music.  Not sure about the breakdown... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Second Hand Smoke

Clever!  What a great way to use that hook.  It actually made me want to do a shot and light up and it’s only 8:55am.  Best wait until 9.  Seriously, good hook.  I can picture the scene and the situation!

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on The Color of You

I like this song Dick!  Good hook.. haven’t heard it in terms of speaking about a kid.  Good job!  Hope the plugger lands something for you all. Much luck with it!

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Baby I'm Gone

Good song Dave!  Very hooky.  Love the bar stool in Dallas line.  Great production.  Not sure if you’re in Nashville full time?  I’m your neighbor up north in Dayton.  Enjoyed the song, thanks.