Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Fly On The Wall

Hey Sonya!  I like the concept… that no relationship is a fairy tale.  I was a little confused about the “you” in “if you’da been the fly on…”... Is this character talking to her partner?  Because then in the Chorus it says “you and me”? ... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Broken Hearted

A Jason Aldean vibe.  I like the lyric “feeling so far south”. The song sounds hooky, but I agree with Brent that there could be a lot more to support the title Broken Hearted.  I was a little confused as to whether he was going to be talking... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Then I Will Be

Nice melody.  I like the melody especially at the beginning of the chorus on “So tell me everything’s gonna be just fine”.  I think you could support that concept by showing us what that would “look” like to her.  For example, in the first verse she... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Every Single Christmas

Nice. Wonderful melody. I agree with Brent.  I was expecting the song to be about the relationship with the person she was waiting to come through the door.  I was a bit confused throughout the song.  I would take another stab at it because it’s worth... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Christmas From Prison

I love the imagery in this song!  It paints the picture of his world and then his world at his parent’s home that he’s missing… perfectly! SO SO well written. I love the use of “yard” at the beginning so you don’t think of prison yet…... Read More