Jayne Sachs gave feedback on I Don't Fight Alone

Nice song James.  This is not a subject or genre that I am familiar with (songs with a religious bent), but it is hooky.  I feel like the chorus has a great melody but would love to hear the melody of the first 2 lines repeat exactly again in... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Best Part of My Day

HI Sandra!  Nice feel.  I like that you use internal rhymes and you naturally have different phrasing.  It’s nice.  I agree with Brent.  A lyric that is a bit more clear might be helpful.  I like how you say things in a different... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on If Love is Real

Just caught that you say “riverside” in line 1, so you wouldn’t want to say “river”.. but maybe “waist deep already, tears falling’ down”... Anyway, good luck with it!

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on If Love is Real

I totally dig this song.  It’s so sweet. Love the bridge.  I like how it seems like he is saying the CH to her at the end.  The only thing that catches me is line 2 in V1. I know you want to set up the fact... Read More

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Fly Your Flag

Nice job Rusty. I could see the song in some sort of sync placement maybe… something that would need patriotic music.  Not sure where you’re from, but local TV stations look for that kind of thing.