This is the 6th track off my CD by the same name and depicts how sometimes those we consider as friends and associates can prove challenging in how they treat others while expecting that your friendship will be "A Soft Place To Land".
I would like feedback on the lyrics.
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Good harmonies. I thought the word “plan” was a little overused and might look for a substitute word. It would be good to find something that does not rhyme with land wherever you can. It would really help if you could post the lyrics!
February 10, 2014
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Benny Pitsinger
Good harmonies. I thought the word “plan” was a little overused and might look for a substitute word. It would be good to find something that does not rhyme with land wherever you can. It would really help if you could post the lyrics!
February 10, 2014
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