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How much of your life have you spent being someone you're not? Is what I'm basically telling myself...lol
TIME IS UP
No more hiding. No more shrinking yourself to fit inside someone else's expectations. Time Is Up is about breaking free from self-doubt, reclaiming your voice, and finding the courage to rewrite your own story.
I have spent enough time surviving. Now it's time to LIVE.
Any feedback would be appreciated.
Ok, good job.This is probably the best song of yours so far. It kinda reminded me of Linkin Park’s “in the end” For me, though, this song needs a little less “la la las”. It seems like you start to say something and then you jump back into the safety of the chorus. More rap or longer verses.That’s the direction I would advise you. Maybe tell us why this is important to us ..cause time is a valuable thing watch it fly by as the pendulum swings …if you know what I mean.
October 24, 2026
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Yes, I know! too many La La…I did have that thought also!
Sync? How do you submit lyrics for sync? I produce with AI for demo. Who takes AI generated music?
Thank you both for responding!!
October 27, 2026
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If this was a sync song, I think it’s good exactly as it is (even all the La La’s). I translate La Lah La’s as a mental coping skill to either take your mind off of something or shut it or someone out. So, it works on this.
AI generated demos are definitely controversial; But can be a helpful tool. You’d just have to take the next steps if you’re interested in music libraries for sync. Research. You must have a good master recording from a DAW or live demo studio. I sent you a message through this site. Check in your profile on here. Sometimes it works; Sometimes it doesn’t.
October 28, 2026
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La, la, la, Livin in boxes, back against four walls, hiding from truths, never wanted this to be the story, oh, oh, masking my face,
denying....
(grace), (grace), (grace)......., tick, tok, tik, tok, time is up, oh, hmmm, hmmm, la, la, la
Mmmm, la, la, la, the clock has struck, it's now time for freedom, oh, no more living in dream land, I strangled fate, no stage for self-hate, tick, tok, tik, tok, time is up, oh, hmmm, hmmm, la, la, la
Oh, oh, no past, it flies skys, blowin with vices in winds, mmmm, it is time, to rewrite stories, oh, oh all my losses become, my wins, hmmm, hmmm, ain't no shame playing life's games, hmmm, hmmm, la, la, tik, tok, time is up, oh, hmmm, hmmm, la, la, la
Oh, GET UP, GET UP
......now, no wastin life, from ashes rise, into tides, riding waves of unchaining, oh, hmmm, hmmm, la, la, la
Oooo, stop feeling invisible, step into the times of being seen, claim yourself, become your own flame, burn it down until nothing remains, but you
La, la, la, oh, the clock has struck, it's now time for freedom, oh, no more living in dream land, I strangled fate, no stage for self-hate, tick, tok, tik, tok, time is up, oh, hmmm, hmmm, la, la, la, time is up, tick, tok, tik, tok, time is up, oh,
hmmm, hmmm, la, la, la, time is up, breakin free from boxes, this is me, tick, tok, time is up
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Another good sync style song
I think you should really look into it and learn all about it.
October 23, 2026
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Ok, good job.This is probably the best song of yours so far. It kinda reminded me of Linkin Park’s “in the end” For me, though, this song needs a little less “la la las”. It seems like you start to say something and then you jump back into the safety of the chorus. More rap or longer verses.That’s the direction I would advise you. Maybe tell us why this is important to us ..cause time is a valuable thing watch it fly by as the pendulum swings …if you know what I mean.
October 24, 2026
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Yes, I know! too many La La…I did have that thought also!
Sync? How do you submit lyrics for sync? I produce with AI for demo. Who takes AI generated music?
Thank you both for responding!!
October 27, 2026
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If this was a sync song, I think it’s good exactly as it is (even all the La La’s). I translate La Lah La’s as a mental coping skill to either take your mind off of something or shut it or someone out. So, it works on this.
AI generated demos are definitely controversial; But can be a helpful tool. You’d just have to take the next steps if you’re interested in music libraries for sync. Research. You must have a good master recording from a DAW or live demo studio. I sent you a message through this site. Check in your profile on here. Sometimes it works; Sometimes it doesn’t.
October 28, 2026
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DeeDee B
Another good sync style song
I think you should really look into it and learn all about it.
October 23, 2026
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