"I hid behind the walls of shame, scared to let someone know my name", pretty much sums up why I wrote this song...Fear. After losing those close to me, my profession in healthcare, and my son's journey with cancer, I realized I only have "One Life".
I have redone this song so many times, it has become my nemesis! Cannot figure out if its good, or crap, lol
That either means it sounds generic and predictable, or it could fit a movie or commercial licensing opportunities..lol
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No; It means there’s a perfect place for it. Sync uses snippets of often emotional pieces to compliment and communicate a scene better.
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Oh, thank you! See this is why I am here…because I know nothing, lol I’m very late to the game.
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Mmmm, living in silent shadows, with grazing thoughts of chasing,
oh, In the dark there lies a spark, is there strength for one more length? oh, run, run, run
Mmmm, Running empty towards the burn, nothin stoppin me any way the turn. Fires blaze in my soul, now it's time, let in flow, watch sparks light up the night, mmmm, live life mmmmm, One life
I hid behind the walls of shame, scared to let someone know my name, echoes of haters in the past, drivin those thoughts deep into the last
Mmmm, Running empty towards the burn, nothin stoppin me any way the turn. Fires blaze in my soul, now it's time, let in flow, watch sparks light up the night, mmmm, live life, mmmmm , One life
Rain falls on fire, claiming flames for its own desires, let it fall with no fear, shield of faith stops the hate, trap the friction, strike the match, watch it ignite
Mmmm, Running empty towards the burn, nothin stoppin me any way the turn. Fires blaze in my soul, now it's time, let in flow, watch sparks light up the night, mmmm, live life, mmmmm, One life
Drop the shame without blame, rise with flames of your own craving, break down walls, smooth the paving, yield to enslaving
I Run, run, run to the blaze, don't stop until I see no haze, moved into night, til the light, til the light, mmmm, mmmm, I let it burn, filled with flame, let it burn, mmmm, mmmm, I play with fire. Mmmm, I play with fire
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That either means it sounds generic and predictable, or it could fit a movie or commercial licensing opportunities..lol
October 18, 2026
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No; It means there’s a perfect place for it. Sync uses snippets of often emotional pieces to compliment and communicate a scene better.
October 18, 2026
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Oh, thank you! See this is why I am here…because I know nothing, lol I’m very late to the game.
October 18, 2026
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DeeDee B
Sounds like a music library sync song for tv to me.
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