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This song is about everything that music is to me. There's a song for every mood and emotion and there's always a song you can curl up to in any situation.
Charlie,
Unfortunately due to computer problems I have been unable to play the songs on my computer. Just reading the lyrics on your song makes me wish I could hear the music. I really like the lyrics, they seem to do a nice job of getting the idea and the mood of the song across. Also the verses and chorus look good structurally with nice rhymes and consistent rhyme patterns.
Keep up the good work and write on.
Brian
May 10, 2014
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VERSE 1
If only I could wake up Monday morning
And just survive till Friday afternoon
The thoughts inside my brain
That make me go insane
Would leave me once the rhythm’s in the room
VERSE 2
Sometimes my heart cries out in acapella
A lonely melody without a song
There’s music in my head
And something to be said
So, I grab my old guitar and strum along
Take me away where the people are swaying
Take me away where the music is always playing
CHORUS
The music doesn’t judge me
The music understands me
The music doesn’t judge me
The music doesn’t judge me
The music understands me
The music doesn’t judge me
VERSE 3
Now there’s a song ’bout everything you wanted
And there’s a song ’bout everything you need
There’s one that’ll leave you flat
There’s one that’ll take you back
And there’s one that’ll bring you to your knees
So, take me away where the people are singing
Take me away where the music is always ringing
(Chorus)
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Charlie,
Unfortunately due to computer problems I have been unable to play the songs on my computer. Just reading the lyrics on your song makes me wish I could hear the music. I really like the lyrics, they seem to do a nice job of getting the idea and the mood of the song across. Also the verses and chorus look good structurally with nice rhymes and consistent rhyme patterns.
Keep up the good work and write on.
Brian
May 10, 2014
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Julie Field
Nice song Charlie! really catchy and up lifting.
May 06, 2014
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