I got the idea for this song from a movie (a not so great movie). It's about lost love and hope.
Thanks. One thing I was always worried about with this song is that is too short.
April 21, 2014
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VERSE 1
[There’s a] girl I knew in high school she was
Shy and she had eyes like the night
Her name was Summer and
I swear she was the love of my life
I still remember when we parted ways
But when we met I struggled just to say
“My name is Lucas”
VERSE 2
[I was] married after high school, my new
Baby girl had eyes like the night
I named her Summer and I
Swear that she’s the love of my life
After her mama left I headed back
To see if my first love remembered that
My name is Lucas
BRIDGE
What if she has changed? What if she’s the same?
What if she can’t even remember my name?
[She] never wrote or called, it’s been way too long
I’m trembling at her door, can’t stand it anymore
VERSE 3
[Someone] opened up the door it was a
Young man so, I asked for his mom
“I’m sorry mister”, is what he answered
“But my mother is gone
It happened years ago in Hudson Bay
It’s nice to meet you sir and, by the way
My name is Lucas”
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I really loved the story line. Everything flows really well and I enjoyed the listen.
April 21, 2014
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Thanks. One thing I was always worried about with this song is that is too short.
April 21, 2014
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Aaron Jones
I really loved the story line. Everything flows really well and I enjoyed the listen.
April 21, 2014
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