This is a "breakup to the glorious make up" song as pleaded by a very desperate guy, who explains the rough love times from a "Killa' / "Let's make this an easy thrilla' " love story perspective. - Ha!
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V1:
There it is hangin’ there, swingin’ high, our love life in a noose cinched tight.
We could kick the chair out anytime and walk out of each other’s lives.
So hey, Mayday Babe what’s on your mind?
Maybe I’ve been wrong, not doin’ ya right.
Let’s get together kick the bad to somethin’ better like we did in old times.
Chorus:
Let’s draw a chalk line kiss Babe, ‘round the past where it lays.
Let’s make it Nice & Painless, and put those bad days in a grave.
Darlin’ take it slow, don’t go!
Make it look easy, ya know!
We can make it Nice & Painless,
and play those killa’ make-up games.
Like when you loved me to death!
V2:
Fingerprints everywhere at the scene of the crime.
I’m your love-marked man, I’m in your crosshair’s sight.
Don’t pull the trigger Babe and walk on by,
or pull this off executioner-style!
I’ll fly a white flag fast girl to save love’s life.
I’m a lover not a fighter dodgin’ bullets that fly!
Let’s lay it down, I got my hands up high.
Give me a hug and tell me it’s alright!!
Chorus:
Let’s draw a chalk line kiss Babe, ‘round the past where it lays.
Let’s make it Nice & Painless, and put those bad days in a grave.
Darlin’ take it slow, don’t go!
Make it look easy, ya know!
We can make it Nice & Painless,
And play those killa’ make-up games.
Like when you loved me to death!
Bridge:
Lovin’, leavin’, fightin’, screamin’.
The dagger in the back, to lifelong regrets.
I’m sorry, dreamin’, hold-on, believin’.
The love story comeback, that’s the best!
Chorus:
Let’s draw a chalk line kiss Babe, ‘round the past where it lays.
Let’s make it Nice & Painless, and put those bad days in a grave.
Darlin’ take it slow, don’t go!
Make it look easy, ya know!
We can make it Nice & Painless,
and play those killa’ make-up games.
Like when you loved me to death!
Like when ya loved me to death, Babe.
Like when you loved me to death!
Oh, oh, Woah, oh, oh, oh!! ...C’mon!
Just love me to death again.
And again, and again, and again, and again, and again.
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