A good friend of mine was going through a separation, and when he told me the story of what happened, I was inspired to compose "Starting over where we left off".
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Starting over where we left off
Verse 1.
Not a word or a note
How was I to know?
What you wanted was some time away
Instead you kept me in the dark
Took the best part of my heart
Now I’m missing you for one more day
Pre-chorus
I try to hide the signs on my lying face
Don’t know how much pain my crying heart can take
In the pit of my stomach I feel hollow
You’re in my thoughts and dreams, cause you’re my hero
Chorus
Starting over is a mountain I don’t want to climb
We’ve come to close to paradise to fall behind
Give me one more chance to prove my love
it’s better starting over right where we left off
Starting over where we left off
Starting over where we left off
Verse 2.
One bad day tempers flared
Ugly words were said
I thought love overcame the wasted energy
But I misunderstood
The consequence that could
Drive a wedge between the world of you and me
Pre-chorus
I try to hide the signs on my lying face
Don’t know how much pain my crying heart can take
In the pit of my stomach I feel hollow
You’re in my thoughts and dreams, cause you’re my hero
Chorus
Starting over is a mountain I don’t want to climb
We’ve come to close to paradise to fall behind
Give me one more chance to prove my love
it’s better starting over right where we left off
Starting over where we left off
Starting over where we left off
Verse 3.
Not a word or a note
How was I to know?
What you wanted was some time away
Instead you kept me in the dark
Took the best part of my heart
Now I’m missing you for one more day
Chorus
Starting over is a mountain I don’t want to climb
We’ve come to close to paradise to fall behind
Give me one more chance to prove my love
it’s better starting over right where we left off
Starting over where we left off
Starting over where we left off
Starting over is a mountain I don’t want to climb
We’ve come to close to paradise to fall behind
Give me one more chance to prove my love
it’s better starting over right where we left off
Emmanuel Carlos St.Omer © 2022 (BMI)
Email: carlossto@hotmail.com
Mobile: 1 758 7166505
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