Country not pop. Lyrics only. Work in progress. Slow Melody is best fit for this. Always interested in collaboration as I have zero musical instrument ability.
Constructive feedback always welcome
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Next time around, things will be different, I'll handle things better now that my vision is clear.
Next time around-when I tell her I love her, I'll follow with actions that leave her no doubt,
Next time around, I'll give without taking, I'll meet all my promises and do what I say, next time around.
I've finally grown in to this skin that I wear, I understand better now the cross that she bares,
I'll need no more chances to be a good man, I'll love her with fierceness and be honor bound, if she will just give me a next time around.
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