Lyric sheet only. A mothers plight set to music. I feel it in almost a haunting melody but as I am just a lyricist I am not sure what would best fit these lyrics.
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I'm glad you stopped by
I haven't seen you in a while
No, your voice on the phone
Is not the same to your mom
As when we are side by side
You've been on my mind
You have seemed preoccupied
Talk to me
Chorus:
Talk to me—-
Won't you let it all out
I know this world can be heavy
Don't carry it around
Talk to me—
Lay down your head
It don't matter what's been said
Talk to me—
What your going through
Son, it ain't nothing new
I've been here before
Please, don't close the door
and shut me out
Let's figure it out
Just talk to me
Repeat chorus
Bridge:
Let me lend you the wisdom that was lended to me
Let me save you the hurt that they tried to save me
Let me help you get your footing
Then I'll help you stand
You being my baby doesn't change cus your a man
Talk to me
Repeat chorus
Im glad you stopped by, feel like I hadnt seen you in a while…
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