For the one who plays hard to get... It'll always come back to bite you in the ass.
Any feedback is welcome!
I have a real appreciation for the ability to use different accentuation and dynamics in a song, not only with the voice, but with the guitar as well. I hear a clear syncopated rhythm within the guitar while countering the rhythm in your voice.
Aside from that Mackenzie Benish is correct, Your voice goes very well with your style and your song. Keeping doing what you do.
You mentioned your ability to Kazoo . . .well, I think you could add a solo in this;) no Im serious . . .
February 13, 2014
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You say you’re gonna call but at this point I just don’t expect it
You tell me what you want then you sit there lonely and reject it
You tell me that I’m worth every penny you spend on the bus to see me
I’m scared that you’ll take off but you’re not here long enough to leave me
Ya think someday you’re comin’ down
Ya think someday you’re comin’ down, oh (x2)
Winters are the coldest and springtime isn’t any better
And summer is a drag cos you won’t send any f*cking letters
I’m not sure why I wait, It’s not like you’re my one and only
I guess I’m giving you a chance to stop being so f*cking lonely
Ya think someday you’re comin’ down
Ya think someday you’re comin’ down, oh (x4)
One day you’re gonna come around
And find I’m nowhere to be found
You’ll call me every single night
But I will stay far out of sight
You had a plan and now it’s ruined
Cos you never really wanted this to end
Ya think someday you’re comin’ down
Ya think someday you’re comin’ down, oh (x5)
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Golly, I like your voice, it goes well with your song too! Cool.
January 23, 2014
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I have a real appreciation for the ability to use different accentuation and dynamics in a song, not only with the voice, but with the guitar as well. I hear a clear syncopated rhythm within the guitar while countering the rhythm in your voice.
Aside from that Mackenzie Benish is correct, Your voice goes very well with your style and your song. Keeping doing what you do.
You mentioned your ability to Kazoo . . .well, I think you could add a solo in this;) no Im serious . . .
February 13, 2014
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Mackenzie Benish
Golly, I like your voice, it goes well with your song too! Cool.
January 23, 2014
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