This song was co-written with Ron Hirsch and Paul de Marco. 
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VS:
Scattered past, comin' back to me
Like bullets fired, too fast to flee
Knockin’ me out, Knockin’ me down
I never thought she'd be back ‘round … But here she comes
CH:
Hair back in a Jet-black Malibu
Shades are on, she don't even know it's cool
Spinning tires in the dark
My second chance pulling up to park in her Malibu
VS:
Driver's seat, inching close to her
Radio plays, it's so damn pure
Feelin' so right, feelin' so fine
I feel her hand moving close to mine … And here she comes
CH:
BRIDGE:
I remember
Saw her there with an apron on … Cuttin' hair in her salon
Lookin' me up, Lookin' me down
Now I’m here and I’m back in TOWN
CH:
OUTRO:
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Great title, well written (too many cliches for my personal taste) and produced; timeless too. Good clean fun. Hair salons should have it on a loop.
June 14, 2021
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Jackson Lucas
Great title, well written (too many cliches for my personal taste) and produced; timeless too. Good clean fun. Hair salons should have it on a loop.
June 14, 2021
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