Typically, I do not write Christian songs but this was the first one recorded so it's a milestone for me. Specifically, the song is about feeling trapped and realizing you're not alone. The vocals and sound quality are bad but the guitarist is really awesome.
Would a female sing this song better?
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VS:
Caught in a bottle and I wanted to drown
This situation is just where I was found
I was alone in this world of pain
I should have died and just withered away
PRE-CH:
Then, you came, Made my life brand new
Gave my the hope, Now, I can carry through
CH:
And I can't believe, That you're still here with me
But you say to me, You belong with me
VS:
You love me, even before I knew
Jesus you died, Now, I give my life, too
I give you my heart, Take me to where you are
Center of life, you're a dream come true
CH:
SOLO: Chord Progression Change
CH:
OUTRO:
Caught in a bottle and I wanted to drown
This situation is just where I was found
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