The song about a mass exodus of staff from a workplace. It's meant to be a moderately heavy rock song.
I like the song because a full band version will push the mood but are the lyrics to simple for a rock song?
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INTRO:
VERSE:
I worked hard, Every single day
I moved on, I could say I'm SORRY
You worked hard, Try ta break me down
Now, I'm gone, I could say I'm SORRY
PRE-CHORUS:
But I'm not
CHORUS:
No more playing your sick games
Don't have to deal with your two face
Now, that I've found a better place
You ask me back but you just sealed your fate
VERSE:
We worked hard, Every single day
We moved on, I could say I'm SORRY
You worked hard, Try to beat us down
Now, we're gone, I could say I'm SORRY
PRE-CHORUS:
But I'm not
CHORUS:
No more playing your sick games
Don't have to deal with your two face
Now, that I've found a better place
You ask me back but you just made your grave
SOLO:
CHORUS:
No more playing your sick games
Don't have to deal with your two face
Now, that I've found a better place
You ask me back but you just sealed your FATE
OUTRO:
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You sing really good, Uncle Brent. This sounds good. It’s got a cool Alice In Chains unplugged, Mad Season, kind of sound. And, assuming this is alternative or rock, and not country, the lyrics are pretty cool too. Nice job!
February 09, 2021
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Rick Lane
You sing really good, Uncle Brent. This sounds good. It’s got a cool Alice In Chains unplugged, Mad Season, kind of sound. And, assuming this is alternative or rock, and not country, the lyrics are pretty cool too. Nice job!
February 09, 2021
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