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Hi William,
This demo sounds great! This good song with a great melody and chorus. My favorite line is “One night, Two hearts, Three margaritas and the music starts.”
The only thing I’d consider enhancing is creating a musical change in the chorus when the vocalist sings, “the music starts.” Kinda like when the beat drops in a pop song. It might be something as simple as change the vocal effects or percussion rhythm.
Great job! Keep it up!
Thanks,
Uncle Brent
March 15, 2021
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William, Really well done on this one. Super tight lyrics and I think the demo captured the sentiment well. Nothing seemed forced and every line kinda flowed to the next so smooth.
A much more new country feel than most of what I see here on the site. This one is a winner in my book.
Great write William.
March 20, 2021
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Another night out on this old town
Same old bar, same old friends around
Life is pretty simple round here
But that all changed when you walked in
You were hanging out with some of your friends
But that little smile damn near knocked me…down
One night, Two hearts,
Three margaritas and the music starts
Life was pretty simple round here… but now there’s
One girl, to convince
Three words I’ll tell no other since
That one night, with you
I saw my chance, and I’m gonna take it
So here’s my heart if you want to break it
Yea I’m all in….Can I get you to feel the way I do
And I will let you drive me crazy
If you let me call you baby
From running round… Now I want, to settle down with you
Since…
One night, Two hearts,
Three margaritas and the music starts
Life was pretty simple round here… but now there’s
One girl, to convince
Three words I’ll tell no other since
That one night, with you
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Eric (aka dolylamby's posse) Lamb
Really good song… Well written and the production is done nicely to highlight the song’s melody and lyrics. Good luck with it!
March 13, 2021
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Hi William,
This demo sounds great! This good song with a great melody and chorus. My favorite line is “One night, Two hearts, Three margaritas and the music starts.”
The only thing I’d consider enhancing is creating a musical change in the chorus when the vocalist sings, “the music starts.” Kinda like when the beat drops in a pop song. It might be something as simple as change the vocal effects or percussion rhythm.
Great job! Keep it up!
Thanks,
Uncle Brent
March 15, 2021
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William, Really well done on this one. Super tight lyrics and I think the demo captured the sentiment well. Nothing seemed forced and every line kinda flowed to the next so smooth.
A much more new country feel than most of what I see here on the site. This one is a winner in my book.
Great write William.
March 20, 2021
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Eric (aka dolylamby's posse) Lamb
Really good song… Well written and the production is done nicely to highlight the song’s melody and lyrics. Good luck with it!
March 13, 2021
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