I worked on this song with Frank John who is the singer / producer on this track.
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Great Job William.
I like the message. Very relatable.
The chorus sings well and is easy to remember.
A bit old school and thats right in my wheel house.
That said I could see this as marketable.
Good luck my friend.
Joe
March 20, 2021
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The rain is pouring down the window pain
But even in the sun was shining, well I’d still feel just the same
Because no matter where I go, and no matter what I do
I’m still here all along, while he’s sitting there next to you
Time to hit the old highway
Cause theres, only memories if I stay…
Yea time to hit the old highway
Am I looking for something better, or am I really just running away…
Been wondering when this went off track, or was there always something wrong
They say its one step back, I say its two steps gone
If you thought I was burning out, well now I’ve just caught fire
Time won’t always change a man, but eventually he’ll just get tired
Time to hit the old highway
Cause theres, only memories if I stay…
Yea time to hit the old highway
Am I looking for something better, or am I really just running away…
Yea I might be running, but I got the devil on my back, and I can feel him coming
…. Don’t be thinking I’ll just be waitin round here for you…
Time to hit the old highway
Cause theres, only memories if I stay…
Yea time to hit the old highway
Am I looking for something better, or am I really just running away…
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Hey William,
Great song! The lyrics are phrased really great and the melody is very sing-able. Thanks for adding a guitar solo because it’s missing from many songs today. My favorite line is “Yea time to hit the old highway, Am I looking for something better, or am I really just running away”.
Thanks,
Uncle Brent
March 10, 2021
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Great Job William.
I like the message. Very relatable.
The chorus sings well and is easy to remember.
A bit old school and thats right in my wheel house.
That said I could see this as marketable.
Good luck my friend.
Joe
March 20, 2021
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Uncle Brent ...
Hey William,
Great song! The lyrics are phrased really great and the melody is very sing-able. Thanks for adding a guitar solo because it’s missing from many songs today. My favorite line is “Yea time to hit the old highway, Am I looking for something better, or am I really just running away”.
Thanks,
Uncle Brent
March 10, 2021
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