About a boy. From our first interaction I was enthralled with him. But I would only see him twice a month...We Continued to get to know each other. But to this day he doesn't know a thing about it as he even sings along with this song.
They are all my live recordings that I post because it wont take my
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Driving around town
Driving around town thinking about you
I try to be cool
I try to be cool when I’m around you
But in my head I’m going crazy
Thinking bout you to much lately yeahh
But I don’t want to drive you away
I’m over cautious because I don’t know if you feel the same
I don’t know you
But I want to
know everything about you
but for now
its
Shy glances from across the room
exchanging smiles
While I think fondly of you
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Que romantico. And I love your voice; keep singing that way. The unique nuances of your pronunciation, phrasing, and melody choices are catchy, intriguing, and kinda hypnotic (like the glide of “town”).
Great live take, by the way. You’re genuinely believable.
The only thing I would say to improve is the dynamics: vary the intensity of the verses and choruses by maybe playing part of the chord sometimes and the full chord later, or picking single notes and strumming later.
Keep that one in the set.
December 29, 2013
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Matt Rees
Que romantico. And I love your voice; keep singing that way. The unique nuances of your pronunciation, phrasing, and melody choices are catchy, intriguing, and kinda hypnotic (like the glide of “town”).
Great live take, by the way. You’re genuinely believable.
The only thing I would say to improve is the dynamics: vary the intensity of the verses and choruses by maybe playing part of the chord sometimes and the full chord later, or picking single notes and strumming later.
Keep that one in the set.
December 29, 2013