This song is a few years old.
It is about how we all have those days/months/years when we don't feel like ourselves. When you look back and think of how did I get to this place.
This is just a quick one take through recording. I am working on legitimately recording this stuff soon.
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Sitting here watching my face in the mirror
Staring myself right dead in the eye
Wondering why I don't recognize
The person inside
I gasp for breath
I can barely breath
This lingering emotion is hanging over me
I'm just a shadow of the person I want to be
Every word I say comes out in anger
And that's not the way I planned it to be
What happen to patient smile
The love that never died
Mirror mirror I don't want to feel this way anymore
Mirror mirror I don't want to think this way anymore
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Sometimes I get disappointed in my own lack of ability to write a song that lends itself well to harmonies. This whole song can be great for multiple harmonies. Think of Lorde, Fleet Foxes, or Crosby Stills & Nash. Give it a try.
The line “lingering emotion” felt awkward, but good song.
December 29, 2013
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Matt Rees
Sometimes I get disappointed in my own lack of ability to write a song that lends itself well to harmonies. This whole song can be great for multiple harmonies. Think of Lorde, Fleet Foxes, or Crosby Stills & Nash. Give it a try.
The line “lingering emotion” felt awkward, but good song.
December 29, 2013
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