I wanted to write and record a song that one the '60s girl groups might have recorded, or thinking more recently, what someone like an Adele or an Amy Winehouse might enjoy singing.
What do you think?
Hi Allan ... what a nice thing to say and so glad you enjoyed the song! No question the 60’s was a special time for music.
August 21, 2020
No members have liked this comment.
You must be signed in to post feedback.
Verse I
YOU TELL ME EVERYTHING, WITHOUT SAYIN’ A WORD
IT’S HOW YOU HOLD ME BABY, I KNOW THAT I’M YOUR GIRL
Chorus I
SO TAKE A LOOK IN MY EYES AND KNOW, FOR SURE
I LOVE THE WAY YOU LOVE ME—CAN YOU SEE?
BUT I WANNA SAY—--HEY BABY I LOVE YOU MORE
Verse II
YOU CAME ALONG WHEN I WAS DOWN, PEEKED OVER MY WALL
YOU SAID “IT’S ONLY ME BABE, BUT I’LL GIVE YOU MY ALL”
Chorus II
SINCE THEN I GAVE ME TO YOU AND KNEW, FOR SURE
TO KEEP FALLIN’ FOR THE WAY YOU LOVE ME—BUT BELIEVE
WHEN I SAY—YEAH BABY I LOVE YOU--OOH--OOH...
Bridge
...OOH BUT THEY’LL BE NO UNGRATEFULNESS
SHOULD THE FATES DECIDE TO TURN THE PAGE ON US
‘CAUSE LOVE COMES—LOVE SHOWS— LOVE GOES—BUT UNTIL THEN…
Verse III
I’LL REACH FOR YOUR HAND MY DEAR WHENEVER STORMS MAY BREW
‘TWEEN THE LIGHTNIN’ AND THUNDER BABY, YOU’LL KNOW JUST WHAT TO DO
Chorus III
‘CAUSE EVERY TIME I CLOSE MY EYES I DREAM, FOR SURE
OF ALL THE WAYS YOU CAN LOVE ME—AND BELIEVE YOU
DO LOVE ME—BUT BABY I LOVE YOU MORE
OUTRO
...OOH--I LOVE YOU MORE--MMM
℗©️2018New Fusion Publishing//Take Note Records®️
0
Hi Robert,
I’ve only been a member for about a month. I try to listen to all the new songs posted. I think you are one of the most talented songwriters here. I love this song. The vibe and lyrics are incredible. Yes, I was around in the 60s. Awesome job man. Way to go!
August 20, 2020
0
Hi Allan ... what a nice thing to say and so glad you enjoyed the song! No question the 60’s was a special time for music.
August 21, 2020
Do you want to have this song reviewed by an industry professional or a hit songwriter? Click on any of the professionals below to purchase your review.
Brent Baxter:
Pro Songwriter
$25.00/Song
Sam & Becca Mizell:
Hit Songwriters
$50.00/Song
Tell your peers about professional song reviews on Songwriting Pro.
×
Allan Rosensweig
Hi Robert,
I’ve only been a member for about a month. I try to listen to all the new songs posted. I think you are one of the most talented songwriters here. I love this song. The vibe and lyrics are incredible. Yes, I was around in the 60s. Awesome job man. Way to go!
August 20, 2020
No members have liked this comment.