I was listening to the Beach Boys' "Don't Worry Baby", channeled my inner Brian Wilson, and came up with this tune.
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Intro
Come on and hold on sweet baby
Come on now hold on
We can make everything alright!
Verse I
1. My mind is whirlin' 'round and 'round in my head
2. Tell me how does it feel for you?
3. Girl I remember all the things that you said
4. Told me that our love was real for you
Lift I
5. Yeah you pulled me in fast and deep
6. But whenever we both disagree ...
7. Well you turn ‘round and walk out on me ...
Come on come on!
CHORUS I
Come on and hold on sweet baby
Come on now baby
Come on and hold on sweet baby
Come on now hold on
We can make everything alright!
Verse II
1b. If there is something I have said or done
2b. Say the word and I’ll apologize
3b. But sometimes foolish pride can get it all wrong
4b. And to get undone well that just ain’t right
Lift II
5b. Don’t you realize it’s all compromise?
6b. Why not come here and sit by my side?
7b. Why not take time to take things in stride?
Come on come on!
CHORUS II
Come on and hold on sweet baby
Come on now baby
Come on and hold on sweet baby
Hold on now baby
Come on and hold on take it easy
Come on now hold on
We can make everything alright!
Verse III
1c. It’d be a waste of time and such a shame
2c. If your stormin' out is all for show
3c. I wonder if you’re playin’ some kinda game
4c. Makin’ like you’ve got somewhere to go
Lift III
5c. Don’t be thinkin’ love’s just a pleasant fiction
6c. Well wouldn't that be a sin?
7c. Why can't we – be something to believe in!?
Come on come on!
CHORUS III
Come on and hold on sweet baby
Come on now baby
Come on and hold on sweet baby
Hold on now baby
Come on and hold on take it easy
Come on now hold on
We can make everything alright!
We can make everything alright!
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For a few minutes I was transported away from this mess that is 2020 and back to my youth. Granted the 60s were a rough tumultuous time also, but I really didn’t understand it all back then. Could be right off the Endless Summer sessions. Great job. Simple lyrics, great melody and harmonies. Thanks so much for sharing.
August 26, 2020
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Allan Rosensweig
For a few minutes I was transported away from this mess that is 2020 and back to my youth. Granted the 60s were a rough tumultuous time also, but I really didn’t understand it all back then. Could be right off the Endless Summer sessions. Great job. Simple lyrics, great melody and harmonies. Thanks so much for sharing.
August 26, 2020
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