I wanted to create the vibe of a small, dimly lit night spot: Heels click on cobblestones before entering a blue, smoke filled room ... it's 3am. There's the low hum of whispery small talk as glasses clink ... lovers lean over candle-lit tables ... a jazz combo enters an empty space as James Bond sips alone at the bar. A beauty steps to the mike and sings ... he wonders ...
Whatever you'd like to offer ...
Really Cool Robert.
I think you nailed it based on what you said you were trying to accomplish.
I could see this being viable for T.V. or Movie.
Nice job.
August 22, 2020
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V1
Devil comes on with the cool heat
So instinctively
With chills that sizzle sweet
But burn third degree
For his heart of cold fire
Knows no in-between
Devil comes on with cool heat
V2
He comes on oh so suddenly
No end to his means
Makes you so easily
Then takes what he needs
With the heart of cold fire
And all that cool heat
Comes on you oh so suddenly
Bridge
Does he do it only for the pleasure?
Does he do it only for the pain?
Well if you really take good measure
Isn’t it really all the same?
V3
Devil comes on with the cool heat
Saboteur of dreams
Beware pretty baby
His spell so complete
For a heart of cold fire
It knows no in-between
Devil comes on with cool heat
Bridge repeats
V1 repeats + tag
Devil comes on with the cool heat
So instinctively
With chills that sizzle sweet
But burn third degree
For his heart of cold fire
It knows no in-between
Devil comes on with cool heat (2x)
He come on with …
[ad-lib]:
COO-OO-OO-OO ... OOL ... HEAT!
©2016 Robert Marino/New Fusion Publishing-BMI
℗2016 Robert Marino/Take Note Records®
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Really Cool Robert.
I think you nailed it based on what you said you were trying to accomplish.
I could see this being viable for T.V. or Movie.
Nice job.
August 22, 2020
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Allan Rosensweig
cool song. really enoyed the vibe.
August 21, 2020
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