This is one of the very first songs that I wrote. While a friend of mine's spouse was deployed overseas, she started dating another soldier. When she got home, she told him she wanted a divorce. That situation inspired this song.
Hi, Bob. Thanks so much for the feedback. I think you’re right- it needs a bridge. 
May 04, 2020
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“Just to See Your Face”- Jodie Ross
Verse 1
Sitting in this room all alone
Wondering where we went wrong
It feels like it’s been so long
Since you’ve been gone
My tears are falling
My heart is calling
I’m drowning in my misery
Chorus
If these walls could talk
What would they say
Could they speak of you
And take my pain away
So many memories were made in this place
All I long for is just to see your face
Verse 2
Every night when I fall asleep
I swear I feel you holding me
But I know it’s just a dream
And I wake up to reality
My tears are falling
My heart is calling
I’m drowning in my misery
Chorus
If these walls could talk
What would they say
Could they speak of you
And take my pain away
So many memories were made in this place
All I long for is just to see your face
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Hi Jodie,
I like the feel of the music.
But looking at the lyric, I’m wondering why they broke up ? And does she want to get back together, and does he feel the same way.
Maybe a bridge could complete the story ?
Regards, Bob
May 04, 2020
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Hi, Bob. Thanks so much for the feedback. I think you’re right- it needs a bridge.
May 04, 2020
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robert wronkiewicz
Hi Jodie,
I like the feel of the music.
But looking at the lyric, I’m wondering why they broke up ? And does she want to get back together, and does he feel the same way.
Maybe a bridge could complete the story ?
Regards, Bob
May 04, 2020
No members have liked this comment.