My uncle, "Pop", passed away suddenly and unexpectedly on Valentine's Day while my aunt was in the hospital. It was a tragic situation, so I wrote this song in memory of him and to help process grief.
Thank you. Yes, this was recorded at home and is actually audio ripped from a video. I was just trying to get as many of my songs posted here as I could, but I agree, a cleaner version would be nice.
May 04, 2020
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“Your Memory”- Jodie Ross
Verse
I sit here and I wonder why
But I know there is no perfect time
To say goodbye
I know you're in a better place
And one day I’ll get to see your face again
But until then
Chorus
You’re right here in my memory
I see you and I hear so clearly
And though my tears fall down like rain
They’ll never wash away your memory
Verse 2
The hand on the clock strikes 5
And I swear I hear you pulling in the drive,
But your truck hasn’t moved for days and days
And your hat is hanging there by the door
your favorite boots are sitting on the floor
It’s like nothing’s ever changed
Chorus
You’re right here in my memory
I see you and I hear so clearly
And though my tears fall down like rain
They’ll never wash away your memory
Bridge
I know God said it was your time
And I’m doing my best to get by
But truth is I won’t be doing fine
‘til I walk on the streets of gold
With your hand in mine
Chorus
You’re right here in my memory
I see you and I hear so clearly
And though my tears fall down like rain
They’ll never wash away your memory
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I love the piano feel to your track.
It sounds like your vocal was recorded at home, kind of muddy, maybe too much reverb ?
It would be nice to hear a clean vocal on this mix. Just my 2 cents.
May 03, 2020
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Thank you. Yes, this was recorded at home and is actually audio ripped from a video. I was just trying to get as many of my songs posted here as I could, but I agree, a cleaner version would be nice.
May 04, 2020
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robert wronkiewicz
I love the piano feel to your track.
It sounds like your vocal was recorded at home, kind of muddy, maybe too much reverb ?
It would be nice to hear a clean vocal on this mix. Just my 2 cents.
May 03, 2020
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