From a groove I've had going on in my mind forever. Finally decided to write. Kind of a "I Will Survive" from a man.
1. Does this song need a bridge?
2. My favorite line, Digging from a deeper well, I'm wondering if that's understood.
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SO MUCH LOVE TO GIVE
I fell off the edge of the Earth, trying to find my way back
She said she found someone else, now what we had’s all in the past
I could wallow in sorrow, if I want to drown this pain
But I’ve done that before, don’t feel like doing that again
I’ve learned to roll with the punches everyday I live
Ain’t no doubt about it, still got SO MUCH LOVE TO GIVE
She said, “thanks for the good times” then I watched her walk away
The pieces of my heart are clearly on display
I could stare out the window, feeling sorry for myself
But I’d rather keep digging, digging from a deeper well
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