.jpg)
Any feedback Welcome
Paul
Like the intro on this. Really liked the chorus both lyrics and how its amped up on the melody. You always seem to have good stuff to listen too so keep em coming bud!
February 11, 2020
No members have liked this comment.
You must be signed in to post feedback.
Our Love is on the Line [RW#25 11-8-19]
By Paul deMarco and David Pritchett
Our world is spinnin’ round and fallin’... hitting the ground
Feel like I’m drowning deep in fear and... it’s weighing me down
Running in opposite directions... losing connection
In trouble we stumble till it’s too late... for any correction
PC
But don’t give up, don’t give up
[Chorus]
Our lives are shakin’ like an earthquake
And I’m barely holding on…
Please don’t let my heart break
I can’t wait till the fire is gone
Yeah, our lives are shakin’ like an earthquake
And we’re… running out of time
Our love is hangin’ on the edge
(Our love is hangin’ on the edge )
Our love is on the line…
Remember when we felt the sunshine... all of the time
Now there’s a dust cloud that's eclipsing... your light from mine
My breath is tight, theses shadows frighten... I’m lost in the night
Nothing is working right can’t find the switch to turn off the fights
[Repeat PC]
[Repeat Chorus]
[Bridge]
Why can’t we escape these broken days full of blame?
[Repeat PC]
[Repeat Chorus]
0
Paul
Like the intro on this. Really liked the chorus both lyrics and how its amped up on the melody. You always seem to have good stuff to listen too so keep em coming bud!
February 11, 2020
Do you want to have this song reviewed by an industry professional or a hit songwriter? Click on any of the professionals below to purchase your review.
Brent Baxter:
Pro Songwriter
$25.00/Song
Sam & Becca Mizell:
Hit Songwriters
$50.00/Song
Tell your peers about professional song reviews on Songwriting Pro.
×
Randy England
Love it. Gotta be sync somewhere.
February 07, 2020
No members have liked this comment.