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Tail Light Rhapsody
Clare E Steffen and Paul deMarco © 2018
Verse 1
I am here to tell my story... Some will listen, some won’t care
Some will talk right over me... As my words drift in the air
But if you want to have compassion... Or relate as I tell the tale
Of my crazy life adventure... Take a minute, sit here while I wail
Verse 2
The words they don’t come easy... No they never did for me
That’s probably why she left me... I got stuck in first gear
She wanted to go forward... I guess I didn’t really care
It’s the road of good intentions... And I just stood right there
Chorus
I should have chased those tail lights
I should have pleaded come back to me
‘Cause my baby she done left me
That’s my story, tail light rhapsody
Verse 3
I could see her tail light dimly... As she drove away that night
Why didn’t I stop and get her back... I could of put up a fight
But fightin’ ain’t my strong point... I’m a lover can’t you see
But love is just a word... When she ain’t got no love for me
Chorus... Solo … Chorus
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Dude, You should release this one if you haven’t! Good vocal and guitar play … Great feel.
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February 09, 2021
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Dude, You should release this one if you haven’t! Good vocal and guitar play … Great feel.
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February 09, 2021
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