Give it up
By Paul deMarco © 2021
When you gonna give it up
Oh darling
When you gonna give it up
Oh girl
How many times
have you closed and locked the door
But I keep on coming,
coming on back for more
I tell you I ain't like those other guys
that mess round
You got to know I'm serious
And I wanna know now
Chorus
You play hard to get
But I won't be backing down
You can build your walls up high
But i know where your heart can be found
Chorus
Don't be scared don't be scared
I'll keep you safe from harm
You don't have to let me go
Just hold on to my loving arms
Chorus
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Paul,
Too many people like you. 
Lol ... Crazy style to be heard from you. I think your rhythm guitar tone should be a little brighter and the there needs to be a little more loosie goosy. My favorite line is “You can build your walls up high ... But I know where your heart can be found.”
Thanks, Brent
August 31, 2021
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Uncle Brent ...
Paul,
Lol ... Crazy style to be heard from you. I think your rhythm guitar tone should be a little brighter and the there needs to be a little more loosie goosy. My favorite line is “You can build your walls up high ... But I know where your heart can be found.”
Too many people like you.
Thanks, Brent
August 31, 2021
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