Hey, Paul! Thanks for sharing this one!. You already know I like it - as it made the top 10 for the recent Lyric Pitch Event with hit songwriter Steve Dean. Of course, then I only saw the lyrics. I’m glad I get to hear it - good work and a nice rock sound!
January 21, 2021
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Make her come back today
V1
I hope the sun comes out tomorrow and dries up all this rain
It's been pouring since she moved back to her moms in Champaign
I’d trade chasing dreams, to see her walk back through that door
I’ve sang in front of thousands but she won’t listen anymore
Chorus:
Oh God can you hear me, I hope You won’t forget
Are You listening to my whispered words
Cause You haven’t answered yet
Sending all my prayers, hoping You can find a way
Cause God you’re my maker, please make her come back today yeah yeah oh oh ooo ooo
V2
Running with my band, yeah, we’d stay out all night long
In the morning I’d come stumbling in with my guitar and a song
Oh we had something special, but there’s always one more show
And I got so good at leaving, yeah leaving her alone
Chorus:
Oh God can you hear me, I hope You won’t forget
Are You listening to my whispered words
Cause You haven’t answered yet
Sending all my prayers, hoping You can find a way
Cause God you’re my maker, please make her come back today yeah yeah oh oh ooo ooo
Bridge:
I know how selfish I’ve been
LAWD you changed my heart, now PLEASE help her see
Guitar riff
Lord make her love me again
Chorus:
Oh God can you hear me, I hope You won’t forget
Are You listening to my whispered words
Cause You haven’t answered yet
Sending all my prayers, hoping you can find a way
Cause God you’re my maker, please make her come back today yeah yeah oh oh
Lord make her come back today yeah yeah oh oh ooooooh
I hope the sun comes out tomorrow and dries up all this rain
Written by Mike McCorison / Johnny Guest / Paul deMarco 4/2020 revised 12/2020
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Hey Paul,
I always look forward to your music and you didn’t disappoint on this one. Great music, lyrics and groove. Much success in 2021. Fantastic song man.
January 16, 2021
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Hey, Paul! Thanks for sharing this one!. You already know I like it - as it made the top 10 for the recent Lyric Pitch Event with hit songwriter Steve Dean. Of course, then I only saw the lyrics. I’m glad I get to hear it - good work and a nice rock sound!
January 21, 2021
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Allan Rosensweig
Hey Paul,
I always look forward to your music and you didn’t disappoint on this one. Great music, lyrics and groove. Much success in 2021. Fantastic song man.
January 16, 2021
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