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Face your flames

Paul deMarco

July 03, 2020

Genre: Pop

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Jeff Craft

Hey Paul I like the song it has a nice feel ,my feedback is actually on the drums,On the chorus you might try a kind of a surf style ping ride and switch up the bass drum from straight fours to a bum da bum this would add a little more groove to what you are singing also on the bridge leading up to it with tom think an occasional off hight hat splash would add some color

July 07, 2020

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Kay Williams/Mott

I love it, Paul:) 

July 10, 2020

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Face your flames

Written by Paul deMarco

Face Your Flames
Mott/Demarco? June 26, 2020

Verse 1
Woman, you’re on fire
Whatever's wrong you ain't backing down
Did you wake up lookin’ for a fight

Who cares if a plate or two gets broken in the name of love
You can go ahead and cry on me this shoulders big enough

maybe theres something I didn’t say
But I aint gearing up and driving away

Chorus
I’m gonna stay right here and face your flames
You're wound up tighter than a hurricane
There's gonna be lightening
There's gonna be thunder
Girl I got your number (yeah)
Year by year, day by day
I’m gonna stay right here and face your flames


Verse 2
Woman you got me in your sight
Frames might shake and windows might break
Hey then the cracks are gonna let in more light

We’ll close the door behind us and let the love start pouring down
Feel the temperature rise between us and watch as i stand my ground

Chorus

Bridge
The Fire's gotta roar to let the air come clean
Aint that the way its always been
We don’t suffer in silence
We speak without violence (and i hear)
all the things that cant always be seen

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Jeff Craft

Hey Paul I like the song it has a nice feel ,my feedback is actually on the drums,On the chorus you might try a kind of a surf style ping ride and switch up the bass drum from straight fours to a bum da bum this would add a little more groove to what you are singing also on the bridge leading up to it with tom think an occasional off hight hat splash would add some color

July 07, 2020

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Kay Williams/Mott

I love it, Paul:) 

July 10, 2020


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