This is a rockin', country female song, but unfortunately at this time, it is demoed with my male vocal. Sorry for that!
This is a song of mine that's received the most interest over the last couple years. What's it missing? Maybe a better demo? A great female singer?
Hi Mike,
Thank you very much for taking the time to listen and the nice compliment. I really appreciate it. As you know, it’s not easy to write a song, and def not easy to put it out there for others to listen and critique.
I’ll check out some of your songs and return the favor with some feedback.
Thanks again.
January 10, 2020
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good Rockin song and by the way Rick you have a good voice I write a lot from the female point of view I can hear Gretchen Wilson or even Miranda Lambert although I believe she does a lot of her own writing
January 29, 2020
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This is a great tempo and positive tune! So hard to find good upbeat songs with a positive message. The recording and mix sounds great and great job with the vocals as well! I really enjoyed listening to this song a lot. Just a really well put together, solid song. Right on!
March 11, 2020
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Great song Rick and the demo sounds great . To me sitting on the line between country and rock James McMurtry / joe Ely kinda vibe
Sounds great
April 06, 2020
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Thanks, James! I was hoping it was going to be the next big Miranda Lambert hit, but that didn’t happen. Lol. Thanks again.
April 06, 2020
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Man, you can really get up there! Great song ... Do you have a male version?
February 09, 2021
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Thank you, Uncle Brent! Not sure how much you know about recording, but believe me, this resulted in a LOT of overdubs/punch-ins, comping, tuning, etc.. Lol. Shoot, even on the songs that aren’t high, it takes me many, many takes, and they’re still not really a great demo vocal. But I try the best I can.
To answer your question, I don’t have a male version of this song. It does have a lot of female leaning lyrics.
Again, thank you for the compliment on the song. That really means a lot when a complete stranger gives a nice compliment, you know? I mean, my Mom thinks every song I’ve ever written is a #1! 
Welcome to SongwritingPro/Frettie.
February 09, 2021
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Lol … Moms tend to be the greatest fans and it’s too bad we can’t have more people with the same enthusiasm.
I wouldn’t worry about the punch-ins and comps because it’s how it is these days but you deliver it on this song. You have some other songs that are good but the key is not right for your voice … You need to find that sweet spot of your voice like on Bring It On.
I’m a fan so keep’em coming.
February 10, 2021
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I struggle with the right key and the right tempo. Do you have any tips? Thanks again.
February 10, 2021
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Bring It On
(Written By: Rick Allan Lane)
Verse
If a trainwreck’s waitin' around the bend
Bring it on
If trouble thinks it’s my best friend
Bring it on
Yeah, my life ain't been a thing of beauty
Got more drama than a Lifetime movie
And I'm still waitin' on my happy ending
Bring it on
Chorus
I've been burned by burnin’ both ends of the candle
Had it handed to me more than I can handle
But I won't sit around and cry poor me
Whatever lies in store for me
Bring it on
Bring it on
Verse
I see that you can talk a big talk
Bring it on
Well, I've worn a path around this block
Bring it on
I've learned many times that talk is cheap
But you go on, boy, keep flirtin' with me
If you think you can outfox this fox
Bring it on
Chorus
Bridge
I've had my share of dusk 'til dawns
So many times they've done me wrong
But I'm sittin' here with this new dress on
And I think you might be the one
Bring it on
Chorus
Copyright © Rick Allan Lane
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Hi Rick
This is a cool song to listen to and love the lyrics. Your voice is really nice and makes me wanna get up and dance. Keep em coming
January 09, 2020
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Hi Mike,
Thank you very much for taking the time to listen and the nice compliment. I really appreciate it. As you know, it’s not easy to write a song, and def not easy to put it out there for others to listen and critique.
I’ll check out some of your songs and return the favor with some feedback.
Thanks again.
January 10, 2020
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good Rockin song and by the way Rick you have a good voice I write a lot from the female point of view I can hear Gretchen Wilson or even Miranda Lambert although I believe she does a lot of her own writing
January 29, 2020
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Great song Rick and the demo sounds great . To me sitting on the line between country and rock James McMurtry / joe Ely kinda vibe
Sounds great
April 06, 2020
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Thanks, James! I was hoping it was going to be the next big Miranda Lambert hit, but that didn’t happen. Lol. Thanks again.
April 06, 2020
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Man, you can really get up there! Great song ... Do you have a male version?
February 09, 2021
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Thank you, Uncle Brent! Not sure how much you know about recording, but believe me, this resulted in a LOT of overdubs/punch-ins, comping, tuning, etc.. Lol. Shoot, even on the songs that aren’t high, it takes me many, many takes, and they’re still not really a great demo vocal. But I try the best I can.
To answer your question, I don’t have a male version of this song. It does have a lot of female leaning lyrics.
Again, thank you for the compliment on the song. That really means a lot when a complete stranger gives a nice compliment, you know? I mean, my Mom thinks every song I’ve ever written is a #1!
Welcome to SongwritingPro/Frettie.
February 09, 2021
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Lol … Moms tend to be the greatest fans and it’s too bad we can’t have more people with the same enthusiasm.
I wouldn’t worry about the punch-ins and comps because it’s how it is these days but you deliver it on this song. You have some other songs that are good but the key is not right for your voice … You need to find that sweet spot of your voice like on Bring It On.
I’m a fan so keep’em coming.
February 10, 2021
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I struggle with the right key and the right tempo. Do you have any tips? Thanks again.
February 10, 2021
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Mike McCorison
Hi Rick
This is a cool song to listen to and love the lyrics. Your voice is really nice and makes me wanna get up and dance. Keep em coming
January 09, 2020
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