I’ve never been to Dover, New Jersey, Joseph. Lol. Is that close to you? I live in a little bitty town in Indiana called Dover. Thanks for listening!
April 01, 2020
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“don’t know what it was about that exit sign that made me turn off and enter this life”
I love that line! This song has a nice, laidback feel to it. I really enjoyed listening, Also, thank you for the feedback on my song. 
April 18, 2020
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Great job on this song Rick, I got a feel of the eagles, Got a really nice melody too. I like the idea of making little decisions can change your whole life. You’ve got a good country voice too.
April 26, 2020
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Thanks for the voice compliment, Paul. If I could afford to have professional demos made, believe me, I would. I do the best I can, so to hear some good feedback on my vocal track really means a lot to me. Thank you.
April 27, 2020
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DOVER
(Written by: Rick Allan Lane)
VERSE
I WAS DRIVING TO ANYWHERE BUT WHERE I CAME FROM
THOUGHT I MIGHT DRIVE UNTIL I HIT THE OCEAN
BUT ANYWHERE WOULD BE BETTER THAN I LEFT BEHIND
I WAS TALKING TO GOD, LOOKING FOR ADVICE
WHEN THE GLARE FROM A SIGN AHEAD BLINDED MY EYES
IT WAS A SIGN THAT READ DOVER, EXIT ONE MILE
LIFT
IT COULD’VE BEEN A SIGN OR COINCIDENCE
I JUST SHOOK MY HEAD AND GRINNED AND SAID “WHAT THE HECK”
CHORUS
DON’T KNOW WHAT IT WAS ABOUT THAT EXIT SIGN
THAT MADE ME TURN OFF AND ENTER THIS LIFE
I WAS ON MY WAY TO STARTING OVER
WHEN I SAW YOU THAT DAY I STOPPED IN DOVER
VERSE
SO I STOPPED TO FILL UP, FIRST MY TANK AND THEN ME
BUT LEAVING THAT DINER, FATE BUMPED INTO ME
IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN WITH A PRETTY LITTLE GIRL IN HER ARMS
LIFT
WHAT MADE US KEEP ON TALKING, I’M NOT REALLY SURE
BUT SOMEHOW EXCUSE MES LED TO A WHOLE LOT MORE
REPEAT CHORUS
BRIDGE
AFTER ALL THESE YEARS I STILL LIVE IN THIS TOWN
WITH THAT BEAUTIFUL WOMAN
AND NOW THAT PRETTY LITTLE GIRL’S ALL GROWN UP NOW
REPEAT CHORUS
OH, I’LL NEVER FORGET THAT DAY I STOPPED IN DOVER
Copyright © Rick Allan Lane
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I’ve never been to Dover, New Jersey, Joseph. Lol. Is that close to you? I live in a little bitty town in Indiana called Dover. Thanks for listening!
April 01, 2020
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“don’t know what it was about that exit sign that made me turn off and enter this life”
I love that line! This song has a nice, laidback feel to it. I really enjoyed listening, Also, thank you for the feedback on my song.
April 18, 2020
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Great job on this song Rick, I got a feel of the eagles, Got a really nice melody too. I like the idea of making little decisions can change your whole life. You’ve got a good country voice too.
April 26, 2020
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Thanks for the voice compliment, Paul. If I could afford to have professional demos made, believe me, I would. I do the best I can, so to hear some good feedback on my vocal track really means a lot to me. Thank you.
April 27, 2020
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Joseph Guerra
Dover New Jersey good song
April 01, 2020
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