I wrote this one with John Pierce. That's John on vocals.
One thing that I like about your songs (and something that I like to do with many of my songs) is that use of internal rhymes. It makes even a slow song jump just a little bit more.
January 07, 2020
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Well, you got the last word
And made sure that the neighbors heard
Left the blame all on her
And drove away with your pride
You had to show her you were strong
And not admit you were wrong
Well, how’s it feel to be right
CHORUS
Oh, does it feel good
Like you swore that it would
Now that you’re alone tonight
How’s it feel to be right
How’s it feel to be right
Now there you are again
Half drunk and it’s 2am
Begging her to let you in
Flickering front porch light
All she says to you
Is “You said we were through
Well, how’s it feel to be right?”
CHORUS
Is finally being free
All that you thought it would be
CHORUS
How’s it feel to be right
How’s it feel to be right
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I enjoyed this song Brent. Good lyrics, I think the music was good but didn’t really make the lyrics stand out the way I hoped it would. John has a nice voice. Thanks for sharing
December 31, 2019
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One thing that I like about your songs (and something that I like to do with many of my songs) is that use of internal rhymes. It makes even a slow song jump just a little bit more.
January 07, 2020
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Mike McCorison
I enjoyed this song Brent. Good lyrics, I think the music was good but didn’t really make the lyrics stand out the way I hoped it would. John has a nice voice. Thanks for sharing
December 31, 2019
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