I wrote this with Adam Browder and Jeremy Easley. It's a rare pop song for me, but I think it turned out pretty cool.
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By: Brent Baxter, Adam Browder, Jeremy Easley
VERSE:
She’s the shadow I can’t shake
She’s the breath that’s hard to take
The one thing I cannot escape
VERSE:
She’s the whisper in the wind
That chill crawling up my skin
Like smoke through a keyhole, she got in
CHORUS:
So hauntingly beautiful
So hauntingly beautiful
VERSE:
She’s that thunder in my chest
The darkest eyes I can’t forget
The perfect lips I haven’t tasted yet… Yeah, she’s…
CHORUS: [REPEAT]
BRIDGE:
She’s a sleepless night
She’s so deep inside
I swear it’s almost spiritual
Yeah, she’s like a ghost
Wrapped in flesh and bone
So real, but so ethereal
CHORUS: [REPEAT]
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“Like smoke through a keyhole,
She got in…”
Fantastic lyric, and killer imagery throughout.
Great job brother!
TD
March 26, 2017
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Todd Dickinson
“Like smoke through a keyhole,
She got in…”
Fantastic lyric, and killer imagery throughout.
Great job brother!
TD
March 26, 2017
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