This is a track off of my soon to be released album Can You Feel This by RW Roldan.
It's about young love and its power over us from the perspective of a helpless parent.LOL!
Hey, Ray- thanks for sharing your work with us! I agree with Corey- nice vibe. I like how you hammer that hook in the chorus and bring it back around at the end of the chorus.
It’s lyrically a little different (in a good way) and interesting. I dig it. Good work.
July 09, 2019
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Bad Love Pain
Written By Ray William Roldan
Copyright: 2016
Written by
Ray William Roldan
Copyright: 2016
Bad Love Pain
Chorus:
She's almost here, but not quite,
she let out of there in the middle of the night.
Movin' like a thunder that rolls across them
lonesome plains.
Yeah she's hurt, but not bad.
her prides a little bruised but her hearts
spittin' mad.
She's dealin' with another case of that Bad Love Pain.
Chorus:
Bad love pain, will take your dreams away.
Bad love pain, no it just seems that way.
Bad love pain, it started with a kiss
Bad Love pain, Dont think she's gonna miss.
That wild boy who gave her bad love love pain.
Chorus:
The phone rings, but she dont care.
Say's talkin' to him is like talkin' to the air.
Or waitin' on a ride from a cold and rusted train.
And then she laughs and finds a smile.
Say's it ain't been long but it's been a little while.
And, bein' lonesome is worse than havin' Bad Love Pain.
Chorus:
Bad love pain, will take your dreams away.
Bad love pain, no it just seems that way.
Bad love pain, it started with a kiss
Bad Love pain, And now she start's to miss.
That wild boy who gave her bad love love pain.
Solo:
Now she's standin' at the door.
say's daddy good bye.
I gotta go now and I can't tell you why.
It's pullin' on my heart and I just cant take he strain.
I'm thinkin' you'll be back but I can't say it.
Cause lifes a gamble, no matter how you play it.
And every once in awhile you'll end up with bad love pain.
Chorus:
Bad love pain, will take your dreams away.
Bad love pain, no it just seems that way.
Bad love pain, it started with a kiss
Bad Love pain, Awh, hell she's headed back to
that boy who gave her bad love pain.
That wild boy who gave her bad love love pain.
Copywright: Rw Roldan 2016
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Hey, Ray- thanks for sharing your work with us! I agree with Corey- nice vibe. I like how you hammer that hook in the chorus and bring it back around at the end of the chorus.
It’s lyrically a little different (in a good way) and interesting. I dig it. Good work.
July 09, 2019
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Corey Bourque
NICE VIBE LIKE IT
July 08, 2019
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