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Gravity by HappyRon

Ronald Hill

July 18, 2019

Genre: Country

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Me overcoming lifelong physical disability to achieve gravity.

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Song has key change on chorus, some like some don't


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Brent Baxter

Hey, Ron- thanks for sharing this with us!  Wow… that 1st line is an attention-getter!  Now, I don’t see this as something another artist could record… as they generally are NOT born lopsided.  But as a song, I respect the positive message.  I’d like to hear a little more connection between the thought of the song and “gravity,” though…

July 26, 2019

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Gravity by HappyRon

Written by Ronald Hill

GRAVITY (tempo 90)
by HappyRon

INTRO: C /// //// F /// ////
VERSES: C /// //// F /// //// C /// //// G /// //// C /// Am /// G /// //// C /// ///
CHORUS: Ab /// Bb /// Ab /// G /// Ab /// Bb /// Ab /// G7 ///
BRIDGE Am /// F /// 4X then G / Bb /

I was born a little lopsided
Could barely stand on my own two feet
I couldn't go where I needed to go
The place...
Where we could meet

Gravity will bring you to me
But it won't happen till you're ready
Gravity is what I need
So I better hold myself steady

Should I be a bit more sexy
Should I be a touch more strong
Should I be just what you want me to be
Or would that be wrong...

BRIDGE:
Gonna poke my head right out of my hole
Take a breath and see what's 'round
And plant my feet right onto the ground
And build up strength for the next round

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Brent Baxter

Hey, Ron- thanks for sharing this with us!  Wow… that 1st line is an attention-getter!  Now, I don’t see this as something another artist could record… as they generally are NOT born lopsided.  But as a song, I respect the positive message.  I’d like to hear a little more connection between the thought of the song and “gravity,” though…

July 26, 2019


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