Waking up to the fact that someone special has entered the scene
Lyrics, Arrangement, Chord Structure, Commercial Appeal
Xave, Thank you so much for your feedback. Funny but the song was originally written in a more rock genre. I think that I might reproduce it one day that way. Really appreciate the kind words and feedback.
Thank you!
April 10, 2019
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On my own and the time passes by, 'til there's only yesterday
tomorrow doesn't care
But I can't remember, I'm lost in the spin, it keeps going ‘round and ‘round
Where did you come in
Early memories aren't always the best, it's been raining for so long
yesterday just won't rest, 'cause I can't remember
the days and years sewn together
Where did you come in
Could this be dreaming sleep, will I wake up, what would I find
If I opened up my eyes, come into me, don't be afraid
'Cause the sun says it's okay today
Now you say that I'm naive, like it's such a bad thing
you say you know it all but I know you're lying
Today is all there is, no time does not exist, yes I take it all in stride
Where did you come in
This must be dreaming sleep, will I wake up, what would I find
If I opened up my eyes, come into me, don't be afraid
'Cause the sun says it's okay today
There are sure things, mistakes and understandings,
but there is only now, there is only today
But I remember I saw the truth in you, and I remember, I remember darling
I know where you came in, I know where you came in
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Nice tempo and vice to this. I’d even make a tad more rock as an experiment. Just to see how it would sound. The Luke Bryans and Aldeans are playing a heavier style guitar. Just a though man. Nice job ![]()
April 02, 2019
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Xave, Thank you so much for your feedback. Funny but the song was originally written in a more rock genre. I think that I might reproduce it one day that way. Really appreciate the kind words and feedback.
Thank you!
April 10, 2019
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Xave Ryan
Nice tempo and vice to this. I’d even make a tad more rock as an experiment. Just to see how it would sound. The Luke Bryans and Aldeans are playing a heavier style guitar. Just a though man. Nice job
April 02, 2019
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