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Little Little

Jeffrey Goffman

February 23, 2019

Genre: R&B

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Finding oneself caught in the middle of falling in love

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Lyrics, Music, Soundtrack, relatable Subject Matter


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Frank Renfordt

Hey Jeff, I love the arcs of melody, excellent production, great singer, catchy chorus.
It could be that they (the biz) will tell you the lyric is not that original and the music sounds a bit dated, but nevertheless this is a beautiful song.

February 28, 2019

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The sun is shining, on that horizon
I wake to see your eyes just gazing back at mine
Those geese are calling, and my heart’s falling
To the melody of Strawberry Wine

The breeze is whispering that song she sings outside
Then you smile and say, come on let’s take a ride

Little Little, stuck in the middle, of loving you
When you hold me, you just unfold me
If wanting you’s a crime I beg for your acquittal, Little little

Life keeps me busy, making me dizzy
Ain’t had a break in so damn long
Thinkin’ about ya, when I’m without ya
So I just had to write this song

I wanna’ love you, yes I want to set you free
We can rise above this world, just you wait and see

Little Little, stuck in the middle, of wanting you
Just wanna be there, with you and me there,
‘Cause you’re the one, you’ll never be my second fiddle, Little little

We’ve both loved and lost but I won’t be denied
No matter what the cost, to keep you by my side

Little little, stuck in the middle, of wanting you
Come here and kiss me, please don’t dismiss me
And when we’re old and gray then you can reminisce me
Just wanna’ be there, with you and me there
So listen close, ‘cause every word of this is true
If loving you’s a crime, then let me do my time
‘Cause my love will last a lifetime darling, it’ll…
Little Little, My little little

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Frank Renfordt

Hey Jeff, I love the arcs of melody, excellent production, great singer, catchy chorus.
It could be that they (the biz) will tell you the lyric is not that original and the music sounds a bit dated, but nevertheless this is a beautiful song.

February 28, 2019


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