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Just another song about a girl.
Music, melody, lyric, relatable topic, can the days of someone's "name songs" come back?
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I just can’t seem to shake you off my mind,
I thought I could in time,
but time just slips away
I tried to reach you on the telephone,
but even if you’re home,
no answer anyway
Tried to figure out just what I’ve done, you’ve turned to stone,
you’ve turned and run so far away, hey, hey
Susan, though I fight this lonely battle still I’m losin’
When I tried to draw you close I found you cruisin’
Now I miss you Susan
It’s such a shame we couldn’t make it work,
it all felt so, so good,
forever and back again
But if it doesn’t fit in all your plans,
one day I’ll understand,
one day beyond the pain
Tried to figure just what I’ve done, you’ve turned to stone,
you’ve turned and run so far away, hey, hey
Susan, though I fight this lonely battle still I’m losin’
When I tried to draw you close I found you cruisin’
Now I miss you Susan…
Tried to figure just what I’ve done, you’ve turned to stone,
you’ve turned and run so far away, hey, hey
Now I wish I knew just what to do to break on through,
what can I do, what can I say,
Because I miss you more and more each day
Susan, though I fight this lonely battle still I’m losin’
When I tried to draw you close I found you cruisin’
Yeah you left me when I need you, needed you most
Susan, now I know the times we shared were not an illusion
But I’ve got to let you know how much I miss you, Susan
Susan
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