This came from the idea of the "split lines" in the chorus, e.g. there is "And you make me" which is complete, but then adds another word for "And you make me smile"
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You turn night into day
Help me to find better ways to live
And to give
You're my *strength in weaker times
An extra lift when already flying high
You're my sail between the stars
And you make me
Smile
And you get me
High
I'm a lucky man
And with all I am, I'm glad I ran with you
Do you know you save me?
You're a port in every storm
Shelter me until the morning light
See me through the night
You let me speak my mind
Lift the veil from what's inside of me
Together we will travel far
And you make me
Smile
And you get me
High
I'm a lucky man
And with all I am, I'm glad I ran with you
Do you know you save me?
SOLO
And you make me
Smile
And you get me
High
I'm a lucky man
And with all I am, I'm glad I ran with you
Do you know you save me?
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