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This song was written after hearing my friend tell me about how she went to a dance with her husband when they were dating and he looked like jelly dancing. haha-I posted this last month and took it down-realize it's good to keep all songs up.
lyrics, worktape quality, any feedback is very much appreciated!
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I know your feeling like the stoneage
a disco joke won't make you sway
you just want to run from here
I can't make you disappear
so baby put your eyes on me
you say your feeling artificial
your jello body starts to loose control
I'm the reason why your here
so sit and watch my premier
oh baby put your eyes on me
Chorus
I know you like me dancing
watch me shake it baby
I'll make you feel that beat
oh baby put those eyes on me
your feeling so lonely on the dance floor
you clap and scream with a big encore
show me that you love me love me
you wanted to run but you didn't get far
ohwahohoh your eyes are on me
ohwahohoh and that means everything
that means everything
chorus
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